Chapters:

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Chapter 2

gudiya night club 2

Stepping on the land of Thailand, shook Jay a bit. People come over to celebrate and spend their vacations in the best possible way, and he was going to explore one of the dirtiest and hidden businesses of the world.

‘Where’s the cab?’ Jay asked a crew member.

‘I’m calling sir, they’re on their way.’

‘They better be fast, my back is paining like hell with this tedious journey!’

‘Sorry sir, give us five minutes.’

The cab arrived and they all headed to their hotel. After few hours of rest and dinner, they set on the streets of Thailand.

‘Where should we start off, sir? I guess this is the right place…’ a crew member showed Jay, a map of Bangkok, in which the suspected areas were highlighted with red.

‘Have you worked with me before?’

‘No sir.’

‘Then shut the fuck up and just do as I say, instead of giving me some stupid advices.’

‘Sorry sir.’ The man was horrified at Jay’s blunt behaviour. This is going to be a long, horrible tour, he thought!

‘Where is that journalist? That person from Bangkok who was going to assist us? Dixit told me there was someone from Bangkok only who was to join us.’

‘He’s here, sir.’ The man pointed towards a chubby, short and fair man, who was wearing flower-printed shirt, as if he was celebrating!

‘Ola, Indians! Your boss Dixit told me you were coming, welcome to Thailand!’ he giggled.

‘You think this is a joke?’ Jay was holding his head now, ‘With this stupid crew, and a moron like you, I don’t think this assignment will ever come to an end.’

‘You are one grumpy old man. Your wife must be annoyed with you…hahaha!’ that Thai-man laughed out loud.

‘Listen, you better stay out of my personal life, and tell me the most vulnerable area.’

‘Every area is vulnerable, you should only have an eye to search for the candy!’ the man winked.

Jay didn’t like this strange person. Dixit had assigned him, which meant he must be useful, but till now, the man displayed all qualities of being totally stupid and useless.

‘Listen up, everyone!’ Jay addressed the crowd around him.

‘First, tell me your name.’ Jay pointed towards that Thai man.

‘I’m Anil.’

‘Better, let’s keep it short only, Anil. So, tell me what plan you got, or whatever you discussed with Dixit.’

‘First of all, I’m helping you here, because you are Indians, and so am I. Thai police won’t ever help you because many of the times they have accounts and settlements with the pimps, who control all the prostitutes. You can’t expect a nice behaviour or any type of co-operation from them, once you are in mess. Stay away from any kind of dispute, just interview the girls, and finish off your documentary, as soon as possible.’

‘I know my work, and we are here to simply finish it off. I have no intentions of getting myself into any mess.’

‘Let’s first go to that club.’ Anil pointed towards a club, that showed some signs of their native language.

On the entrance, there was a huge poster of a girl in bikini, they knew that it was the right place. They all entered the club and they were not searching the wrong place. The club was full of girls, and seeing their gestures only, they knew they had found their targets, but searching Indian girls, was the real challenge. The Thai girls, barely understood English, and any Indian girl, was hard to locate.

‘Look, there!’ a crew member pointed towards a dancer, who was leaning on the pole, showing some seductive moves to the audiences. She was an Indian; the only girl with big eyes and brownish skin tone. Yes, she was an Indian.

Jay moved forward to confront her, and offered her hundred Baht. She took it, and walked down the ramp.

‘Here or somewhere else?’ she asked sliding her finger across his face.

‘Come out.’ He held her hand, and brought her out.

They all went to a nearby hotel and started the shoot. Jay told her that they wanted to make a documentary and needed some strong evidences about Indian girls, who are into this dirty business, abroad. That girl, clearly disagreed to co-operate.

‘Listen mister, if I agree to speak up, my owners will kill me, or worse, won’t give me any food and I’ll starve to death. I don’t want that to happen, so better, fuck off, and here, take your money.’ She threw the note across Jay’s face.

Jay got up in repulse, but the other members stopped him.

‘Hey, don’t force yourself into some mess. Hold it man…it happens!’ Anil advised.

‘I don’t think anything is possible tonight, everyone, just leave from here, and head towards the hotel, I’ll be back shortly.’

‘But Jay, you can’t stay here alone…’

‘I said, I’ll be back shortly, now get yourself down the street, right now!’

Everyone rushed towards the street as they knew, Jay never tolerates anything, apart from his orders. Jay also left the hotel and started walking on the street. He knew the way back to his hotel, but he chose to walk in a completely opposite direction. On his way, he saw a lady, standing alone, her hands on her stomach, maybe she was in pain?

‘Hello, are you alright?’

‘Get lost!’ the lady screamed.

‘Hey, I’m an Indian, and you also seem to be an Indian. I’m trying to help. What’s the matter, lady?’ Jay tried to calm her down.

‘Gudiya, my name is Gudiya…’

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  Comments (39)

  • pratikshya..

    August 2, 2013

    nice story..wan 2 read nxt part..:-)

    • Mehek

      August 2, 2013

      All chapters are uploaded here only, dear. Just click on the numbers to move on to the next chapters 🙂

  • syed mofassir

    August 18, 2013

    d story is well written…..an inspiring one…
    if I get a chance to help one such victim of dis hellish bussiness I would do anything 2 pull back from dis cruel prostitution…

    • Mehek

      August 18, 2013

      Thank you very much 🙂 if the government is supportive, scenario can be definitely changed.

  • harsha

    August 25, 2013

    whatttaaa story Mahi.. got tears.. hatsoff girl !! god bless.. keep writing 🙂

    • Mehek

      August 25, 2013

      Thanks a lot 🙂 and my name is Mehek, not Mahi 🙂

  • savita

    August 25, 2013

    gr88888 work dear…..really awsm…..touchng story….n d bitter truth also..,,,

    • Mehek

      August 25, 2013

      Thanks!

  • swati

    August 26, 2013

    this story brout tears in my eyes…we spend thousands a day nt caring sumone sell der body just to get their meal…wish cud help atleast one of them releasing them from such hells..:'(

    • Mehek

      August 26, 2013

      thanks dear 🙂 There are still some people who selflessly help others 🙂

  • Hemal

    August 27, 2013

    Very nice and touching story.
    We r very busy in our own materialistic and selfish beings that we r not able to see the sorrows of other people which r far more realistic than our.
    It is situation which jay faced that will bring us to our real senses and we will think of helping others.

    • Mehek

      August 27, 2013

      Exactly! But nowadays, nobody has the time to do anything for anyone. Even if we see a poor beggar on traffic signal, we’ll prefer to drive fast and ignore him, instead of donating some money, which maybe nothing to us, but everything to that poor soul! 🙂

  • manpreet

    September 29, 2013

    just finished this whole story at once… its really gud… touching story…. now i’m just going to buy ur book ,which i’ven’t read yet… 🙂

    • Mehek

      September 30, 2013

      Thanks! I hope you like Chained too, happy reading 🙂

  • neha

    October 8, 2013

    Ausm story ….infact felt like i ws experiencing it live…….
    .congratulations …to u uuu n tq u for writing it……

    • Mehek

      October 8, 2013

      Thanks a lot 🙂

  • dawn

    October 9, 2013

    Amazingly beautiful!! 🙂
    Gonna read all the stories of ur blog tdy!! 🙂

    • Mehek

      October 9, 2013

      haha 😀 Thanks… 🙂

  • Samayita

    October 11, 2013

    awesome………touched my heart!! :'(

    • Mehek

      October 14, 2013

      Thanks dear 🙂

  • Samayita

    October 14, 2013

    u rite awesome lov stories!! cn u rite a few more..?

    • Mehek

      October 15, 2013

      Of course why not? 😉 let my exams be over I’ll be back with a lot more 😀

  • shubhangi

    January 27, 2014

    Your writing is so damn captivating….really looking forward to read your novel CHAINED…. 😀

    • Mehek

      January 27, 2014

      Thank you dear 🙂

  • Pranjal

    May 12, 2014

    awestruck.. !!
    I was actually living the story.. you narrated it so so beautifully.. as if I know the characters.. gudiya.. jay.. mahi..!
    the way you described every situation from Bangladesh to Thailand.. n graveyard to taj mahal.. it was beautiful… its 4 am.. m habing my external vivas tomorrow… n al I am doing is reading dis story.. 😀
    your writting is really addictive.. 🙂

    • Mehek

      May 12, 2014

      That’s the nicest compliment I’ve got for Gudiya, there were more critics to be honest! But thank you 🙂 And do study, don’t screw up your exams. The stories are going to stay here but your exams will pass away…All the best!

  • Prachi

    June 14, 2014

    i can’t define with words how marvelous this story is!!! kudos (y) keep writing such stories dear… u r a great writer indeed…i was extremely sad to read that gudiya died…but yeah…there is the almighty….it seems all so real…real happenings…real characters..playing in my mind…. don’t know what to say…keep writing dear 🙂

    • Mehek

      June 14, 2014

      Thanks a lot Prachi 🙂 Means a lot! Keep reading and stay connected. There are a lot more stories to come 🙂

  • RaVi

    July 2, 2014

    Message*spechless…outstndng MaHaK…….

    • Mehek

      July 2, 2014

      Thanks Ravi, and the name is ‘Mehek’ 🙂

  • Irtayag

    July 25, 2015

    I m speechless… amazing.. how deeply u think and so nicely u pen it down. I was so engrossed into the story.. I cud visualise it. All the characters as if I m not reading it rather watching it live.
    Beautifully written and the message is also so touching..

    • Mehek

      July 25, 2015

      Thanks Gayatri…Gudiya was one of the toughest stories for me to pen down, because writing about prostitution and the ill-fated people associated with it is never easy, but I’m glad I could write it… 🙂 Thanks for reading it! You can follow my latest story here – http://www.mehek.in/fiction/inconsistent-love

  • Behshid Khairdi

    December 14, 2015

    Hello Mehek…..I am totally gripped to your stories….each story teaches me something,all kinds of stories are here..happiness,marriage,horror,black magic….I am savouring each and every story….just wanna thank u for all this…

    • Mehek

      December 15, 2015

      Hello Behshid 🙂 Thank you very much for your kind words of appreciation. I’m glad you liked my blog! Keep reading and stay connected…

  • Daisy

    April 16, 2016

    wow! literally brought tears to my eyes….it’s very sad that these kind of evils are still prevalent…..i wish the sufferers in real life have a happy ending just like gudiya in this story….but i guess that’s the differene between stories and real life….real lives do not always have a happy ending, do they? oh, but how i wish some real life jay would pop up from somewhere and help real life gudiyas….
    yeah, i know i am bad at explaining…
    anyway, now coming on to your writing skills, hw i wish i had a bit of your talent…. from a few days, the name mehek bassi kept coming into my mind, though i did not know why…so i finally searched the internet and am very glad to come across this website….i am a voracious reader and so you know how happy i was when i saw this site…and girl, you are an amazing writer! this is your second story i’ve finished reading in a day…
    i know i talk too much 😀 but hey, i couldn’t help it!!
    well done, mehek! keep writing!!!

    • Mehek

      April 16, 2016

      Thank you so much Daisy! 🙂 Your every comment means a lot to me, I am glad that you liked even the unconventional stories, otherwise most people search for hopelessly romantic love stories alone. Glad to find a reader who values other genres as well, that inspires writers like me to experiment and explore other areas of literature too! Thanks once again…God bless you

  • Kashish Malhotra

    July 31, 2016

    You are outstanding. You are the best.

  • Ankita patel

    December 23, 2018

    You are greatest one. While reading this story, I m feeling like wacthing a very interesting movie. thanx a lot. I m mad for your every story.

    • Mehek

      February 13, 2019

      Thanks a lot Ankita! 🙂 Much love…